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Posted: 01 October 2007 at 8:27am | IP Logged Quote Richter

The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

These are some of those stories. This is:

It should be noted that this project is not in any way officially affiliated with either IDW Publishing or Hasbro. They're just some short stories crafted by your fellow Transformers enthusiasts.

That being said, everyone is welcome to leave comments and whatnot regarding the posted stories. Just bear in mind that no one has been paid for this work. These stories are the result of people taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love.

Here we have "Gentle Persuasion" by Jon Stone (aka Jack Cade):



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Posted: 01 October 2007 at 8:49am | IP Logged Quote silverbolt

awesome artwork dude seriously.

my only issue the dialogue is cornier than a three pack of green giant



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Posted: 01 October 2007 at 11:16am | IP Logged Quote Richter

silverbolt wrote:

awesome artwork dude seriously.

my only issue the dialogue is cornier than a three pack of green giant

Thanks, I think this piece is designed to fit in the orriginal G1 cartoon, hence the dialogue being somewhat cliche'



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Posted: 01 October 2007 at 1:14pm | IP Logged Quote Specimen-17

I say, a transformer actually performing their function?!? Well I never!

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Posted: 01 October 2007 at 5:23pm | IP Logged Quote Soundwave9504

not bad nice as well nice more comics nice.

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Posted: 01 October 2007 at 7:36pm | IP Logged Quote Jack_Cade

"my only issue the dialogue is cornier than a three pack of green giant"

I see where you're coming from. The truth is that this is how I thought Cliffjumper should talk - total bravado, a little bit cheesy. I don't think I'd write any other TF talking like this.
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Posted: 01 October 2007 at 7:41pm | IP Logged Quote Specimen-17

The author eh? Good job on actually utilising Vortex's function, I don't think it's been done before.

Is that a Cybertronian Sparkstalker in the last frame? The cockpit reminds me of a certain Gobot.


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Posted: 01 October 2007 at 11:32pm | IP Logged Quote Jack_Cade

Got it in one!

You thinking of Pathfinder, or that Zeeman character with the monocle? Or maybe his red Guardian counterpart?

Oh dear - I remember too much about Gobots!
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Posted: 01 October 2007 at 11:47pm | IP Logged Quote Specimen-17

No, not Zeeman, but I'm sure there's one that has a sticking-out cockpit and the arms fold back on top of the vehicle mode.

But you've raised another good point - Why is there no Transformers with a monocle? Or a top hat? Gobots had both!


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Posted: 02 October 2007 at 6:33pm | IP Logged Quote Sixshot

 We certainly need more robots with monocles and top hats.

 Great mosaic.



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